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Un relat de: Lèvingir
sorolls estranys i monòtons,
em fereixen
el cor se m'estreny
la teva presència he perdut
la teva força ha desaparegut
però et té el meu cap,
molt a prop
i t'escriu i ets ben viu
et tinc al puny de la ma
sense tu res no hi ha

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  • Endavant, sempre![Ofensiu]
    Persona | 29-04-2013

    i com diuen els Asteques...hola! sóc tu! :-)

    "et tinc al puny de la ma
    sense tu res no hi ha"

  • mentre...[Ofensiu]
    annah | 26-04-2013 | Valoració: 10

    el puny sigui capaç d'escriure el què hi ha al cap i al cor, els qui hem perdut segueixen vius.

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  • Del cap a la mà[Ofensiu]
    Naiade | 27-03-2013 | Valoració: 10

    Per pal•liar la pèrdua. Bona descripció de les sensacions que provoca.
    Rai que a traves de la mà podem transmetre lo que tenim al cap i minvar el dolor.
    Una forta abraçada

  • Poques paraules[Ofensiu]
    Silvia8 | 24-03-2013 | Valoració: 10

    Poques paraules que diuen molt. M'ha agadat el teu poema, fa sentir. Felicitats.

  • La pèrdua[Ofensiu]
    Aleix de Ferrater | 24-03-2013 | Valoració: 10

    Has descrit de forma magistral el sentiment de la pèrdua. Pot ser la parella, un parent estimat, un amic o un objecte. No sé quin és aquí el cas, però tant és; això és una cosa personal. Simplement et felicito per la claredat de transmissió de la idea de la pèrdua. Una abraçada.

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