Wow, this is quite a whirlwind! The sheer number of interwoven stories is remarkable. I especially loved the metalhead listening to Schubert – such a great juxtaposition. You've created a narrative with so many different angles and connections, that it feels as if you are skiing down a very steep Slope. You could certainly carve out a niche creating something truly unique in storytelling, if you keep pushing this style. Keep writing!