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Un relat de: Núria Niubó


No miris per la finestra avi,
no miris per la finestra
fins la propera primavera.

S’esberla la teva tardor
en l’arbre nu de la joventut.
Petits i humits ulls opacs de boirina
que desdibuixen el paisatge vital.
Rera els vidres la tardor cau lenta
en el barranc de la grisa tristesa.

Avi... no miris per la finestra
fins la propera primavera.
Deixa’m forjar els teus dies
amb un bes a l’alba.

NÚRIA NIUBÓ
octubre 2015

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  • Nostàlgic...[Ofensiu]
    PERLA DE VELLUT | 12-12-2018 | Valoració: 10

    Nostàlgic i a la vegada formós i amb molta qualitat sobre la tardor i el contrast de la primavera. Quina bellesa de poema, que se sent suau com una ploma sobre el temps.
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    Naiade | 12-10-2016 | Valoració: 10

    Quina tendresa destil·la aquest poema. Amor ho impregna tot,
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  • Ja t'he comentat aquest [Ofensiu]

    magnífic poema, dolç i entendridor, que ens provoca nostàlgia d'un temps passat i del temps present en el que la tardor ens ha pres la llum que desitgem, especialment aquí a Lleida, on la boira ho ha envaït tot per culpa d'aquest trons d'anticicló que no para de fer-nos la punyeta.

    Però jo no et volia comentar el poema, sinó dir-te que què fas que no escrius res des de fa temps. No et fa vergonya malbaratar el teu talent deixant els teus admiradors amb el cor en un "ai"? Posa't, no les piles, sinó la bateria i comença a empatollar-te poemes a tort i a dret, que necessitem els teus mots màgics.

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  • Avi, escriu![Ofensiu]
    Aleix de Ferrater | 14-10-2015 | Valoració: 10

    La tardor i l'hivern són dues estacions magnífiques per escriure. Aquelles tardes boiroses i gebrades són un plaer per l'escriptura. Avi, escriu i escriu, i després publica-ho a Relats en Català, que tots ho agrairem. Una forta abraçada, Núria.

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  • La tardor cau lenta...[Ofensiu]
    aurora marco arbonés | 13-10-2015 | Valoració: 10

    perquè la natura es va apagant a poc a poc. Tornarà a encendre's i a reviure quan
    la primavera truqui a la finestra, i els ulls plens de boirina s'il·luminaran en un esclat de nova vida.
    Ai, la nostàlgia de la tardor...! Ens la fas arribar amb la teva poesia sàvia i ben construïda, amb tocs de grisa tristor que enyora la llum.

    Tu saps com expressar els sentiments!

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Sóc addicta a vosaltres,
poetes amics,
mags de la paraula,
il•lusionistes del pensament.

Sóc addicta a l’amor
que regaleu amb poemes,
encadenant versos,
declamant sentiments.

Sí, amics,
sóc addicta.

A les trobades poètiques.
Als silenci compartits.
A les mirades que escolten.
A les mans que s’entrellacen.

A vosaltres.




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