Algú té una armadura?

Un relat de: Nyanga

En busco una de ben forta,
la millor,
la més resistent,
la que tot ho atura.

Busco aquella que no deixi passar les fletxes
d'un cupido massa boig,
aquella que aturi les paraules
que fan que el meu cor plori.

Una armadura de coure o de plata,
d'or o de ferro,
m'és igual el material...
l'important és que no me la pugui treure mai.

Una d'aquelles que et protegeixen
contra les mirades tristes,
contra les hores buides,
contra les llàgrimes de culpabilitat.

En vull una que no em deixi sentir
que tu ets el centre del meu món,
que no em deixi estimar-te tant,
per no haver de patir quan em diguis adéu.

Una armadura resistent a l'aigua,
al foc, al vent i als llamps,
que em deixi abraçar-te
sense lligar-me a tu fins la fi dels temps.

Una que no em permeti plorar
quan et sento parlar del passat,
quan m'imagino un futur dubtós,
quan visc tement el present.

En vull una,
la compro al preu que sigui...
perquè mai serà tan alt
com el de veure el meu cor
trencat en mil bocins.

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  • No la tinc...[Ofensiu]
    nuriagau | 09-04-2011

    ... però quan la trobis tu, Nyanga, fes-m'ho saber.

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  • gràcies a tu...[Ofensiu]
    joandemataro | 22-08-2010 | Valoració: 10

    i crec que no et cal armadura, és millor sentir les coses directament a la pell, per molt dures que siguin...
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  • Et sentiries molt sola amb aquesta armadura[Ofensiu]
    llacuna | 17-01-2010 | Valoració: 9

    Imagina't que aïllada allí dins on ploraràs i ningú no et veuria, perquè dius que no te la voldries treure mai, en tot cas si fos una armadura per a certes circumstàncies estaria més bé, però per sempre bufff!

    Crec que si la visualitzes ja la tindràs, realment en algunes situacions cal anar ben protegida.

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  • Jo et diré[Ofensiu]
    Nonna_Carme | 17-01-2010

    on pots trobar-ne. És una botiga que s'anomena "Vida". Però no en trobaràs cap de perfecta. Totes tenen un petit defecte, una escletxa per on ens puguin ferir.
    Bellíssim el teu poema, Nyanga. Et felicito.
    Una abraçada.

  • Així s'aprèn a ...[Ofensiu]
    instants | 13-01-2010

    viure, a plorar, a somriure, a sommiar, a cantar...

    Només aquell que reconeix la seva debilitat és capaç de descobrir la seva fortalesa.

    Una abraçada.

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  • Comentari en forma d'ironia (la millor manera d'oblidar les penes i trobar l'alegria).[Ofensiu]
    Toni Arencón Arias | 30-12-2009 | Valoració: 10


    Magatzems Pladiura
    "La Casa de l'Armadura"
    A tots els nostres clients
    desitgem un Bon Nadal.

    Ara seriosament: JO TAMBÉ VULL AQUESTA ARMADURA!!!

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  • Com en el teu...[Ofensiu]
    natasha | 28-12-2009

    ... poema, jo també vull una armadura per tot el que bé i literalment ens descrius... com aquella closca d'una tortuga...
    Si trobes on comprar-la avisa ;) ara seriosament, molt bon text i un reflex d'una sensació massa familiar.
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  • waaaaaaw ![Ofensiu]
    somnisdecolors | 21-12-2009

    jo tambè vull una armadura com aquesta, però ja puc buscar-la que no la trob per en lloc. La veritat espero que algun dia no la necesitis, i siguis capaç de aconseguir tot això amb la teva propia voluntat, i aquet dia em podries fer un favor, quan no la necesitis, avisem i me la deixes si no et fa res perque jo no la trobo per més que busqui. jaja
    i ja no hi ah res més a dir, com tots m'encanta,
    i nose si es que tenim bastant en comú, o que aquets sentimens son molt habituals però com en tots em sento 'identificada'

    Un petò.

  • Jo també busco una armadura com la que[Ofensiu]
    Romy Ros | 21-12-2009 | Valoració: 10

    tu descrius, i si em pot fer insensble encara millor. Pe´rò em sembla que no en fan d'aquestes. Tan sols volia desitjar-te bon Nadal i bon any 2010 i alhora felicitar-te per un relat tan ben conjugat!

  • indefinida | 20-12-2009 | Valoració: 10

    Jo també vull una armadura així, però després de buscar-la durant tots aquests anys no l'he trobat...suposo que és perquè a hores d'ara encara no he trobat algú que no em fes deitjar tenir-la.

    M'ha agradat molt ;)


    Petons.

  • Tu ja la tens ![Ofensiu]
    Joan G. Pons | 20-12-2009 | Valoració: 10

    El teu Relalt em recorda el llibre "El caballero de la armadura oxidada".
    Jo crec que no has de comprar cap armadura. Tu, dins teu, ja tens aquesta armadura.
    Sols cal modificar certes connexions i dependències emocionals.
    T'ho dic amicalment i també per experiències.
    Potser el que necessita una armaduradura és el teu cos emocional, no tu com Persona.
    Una armadura no deixa respirar, que és como "no viure en plenitud".

  • M'ha agradat...[Ofensiu]
    josep fornells | 20-12-2009 | Valoració: 10

    ....molt com l'has escrit, i com t'has expressat.
    Encara que penso que hauríem d'apuntar-nos a algun curset per aprendre a caure sense fer-se mal, que no pas comprar-se una armadura. Amb una armadura no ens poden estimar i no podem estimar. La caiguda sempre pot ser dolorosa, però a qui li agrada enfilar-se amunt, viure amb intensitat i donar-ho tot.... ja se sap, la òstia a vegades és brutal.
    Però val la penaaaaaa!!!!!!!!
    És difícil, però intento sempre recordar els moments màgics i oblidar les caigudes.
    Només així, sense armadures, viurem l'amor amb totes les seves conseqüències. Viure l'amor és un privilegi!!!

    Ostres, quin rollo t'he fotut, no?

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