Assaborint fruits a l'obaga

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Ella em passà una cama
per damunt el muscle.
Com l'acció del cigne
que alça i abat l'ala.
Després, l'altra.

I vaig tenir a l'abast
un tall carnós i sensual
sota l'arrissat borrissol
vellut de seda.
Aspiració profunda.
Perboc almescat
d'incògnites delectances.

-Tota al teu abast, la balma.
Xucla'm!- gemegà.

I vaig posar-hi els llavis,
sense taba.
Enterbolit l'enteniment,
m'hi vaig trobar immers
en l'encetada cova submarina.
I vaig mamussar-la
amb gola.
I vaig llepar-la
amb fruïció.
Llengua i fenedura
de tast deliciós,
almivarat, calent.
Amb tacte sucós,
suau, bleïdor.
Emanacions subtils
de femella;
talls de carn rosada.
Porcellana nacrada
de licors càlids.

La llengua, aletejant,
gaudia d'horitzons
sense marges.
Còvecs abellidors,
rierols i valls;
turons i estanyols,
traslladant entendriments,
inventant caminois muntanyencs
sense argelagues,
resseguint ruscos curulls
de mel, absents d'abelles.

Jo, com ós golafre.
Com tagarot manifasser.
Garbellant il·lusions,
desmai absent.
Tossut, pertinaç,
tossut, tossut, tossut.

Ella, gentil oronella
ratllant l'eretisme,
una vegada. I altra.
Fins degotar la frontera.

Excitats, ens consumírem
sense flama,
atansats l'un amb l'altra
al bell mig de la pineda.

Damunt un matalàs
de carícies i de molsa.

Sota una cel lluent
de pregona gaubança.

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    Nina Abril | 08-05-2007

    quina imatge!!

    "Ella em passà una cama
    per damunt el muscle.
    Com l'acció del cigne
    que alça i abat l'ala.
    Després, l'altra"



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  • Pregona gaubança...[Ofensiu]
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    ... és el que se sent quan llegeixes el teu poema. No t'havia llegit encara i he rigut molt amb la teva "biografia".

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  • Açò és una poesia![Ofensiu]
    Bufanuvols | 25-02-2007 | Valoració: 10

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  • Paladejant intimitats[Ofensiu]
    angie | 24-02-2007

    Un poema dels que m'agraden, amb ritme i ball de mots elegants, contraposats amb unes imatges clares i alhora insinuants que ens fan assaborir la lectura.

    En destaco :

    "Ella, gentil oronella
    ratllant l'eretisme,
    una vegada. I altra.
    Fins degotar la frontera."

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    PS : La fotografia de la bio és pura poesia, xicon.

  • Apa aquí!!![Ofensiu]
    David Gómez Simó | 23-02-2007

    Què vols que digui, rnbonet…

    doncs que m'he perdut amb un munt de paraules i que ara tinc que llegir-me'l per segona vegada amb el diccionari al costat.

    Però tinc que confessar que m'agrada. Té una música de fons i un ritme que em permet sentir-lo en la pell ( com passa amb algunes cançons en altres idiomes, que no pots entendre però et fan emocionar ) i gaudir de l'experiència.

    Felicitats!

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rnbonet ha tingut fills i ha plantat arbres. Ara, entre altres assumptes i dèries, es torba escrivint. Punt i apart. Format en llengua forastera, "por justo derecho de conquista" i "por el imperio hacia Dios" -com tots els seus congèneres a la mateixa època-, utilitza sempre per escriure aquella que li era pròpia, -és a dir, la present- per allò de la identitat i els orígens. I possiblement -caldria un psicoanàlisi seriós- per fer la guitza a la "classe dominant" del seu País. Potser. Punt i apart. Es considera agnòstic i crític, còmic i tètric, dàtil i fútil, pràctic i teòric, bàquic i anàrquic... i tots els mots plans amb titlla que vulguen vostés, i algun que altre d'esdrúixol. Quan es posa filosòfic -cosa que sol ocórrer si li toquen els testets o les barjoles- busca amb un cresol el trellat perdut per tanta gent del país, per tal de retornant-lo al seu poble -abans de fer catúfols totalment-, i veure si aquest esdevé d'una punyetera vegada un poble normal, en un país normal. S'hi cansa aviat, però. I abandona fins l'altra tocamenta. Mentrestant, ritme, paisatge i mesura. Amb qualque excès escaient, oportú. Què li anem a fer! Som de carn! Punt final.

R en Cadena


EmmaThessaM en va 'encadenar' i jo he passat la cadena a "Ada Bruguera Riera" i a "Arbequina". I a "La banyeta del badiu", i a "Biel Martí".

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